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Post by Kazenokami on May 30, 2015 1:44:08 GMT
I believe I am finally finished (not including his background). And I finally decided on switching up the name for his wind/air manipulation with one of Kuma's suggestions as well as giving Ebony Curse a more Japanese name. ^^ Looks great so far =D Can't wait to see the background Thank you very much. As for his background, don't hold your breath. XD
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Post by HungryHunter on May 30, 2015 3:56:54 GMT
Don't sweat the background too much. Unless it really has to be complex, just keep it short and simple. After all, you're telling his story here.
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Post by Kazenokami on May 30, 2015 4:01:27 GMT
I'm not sweating the background. xD
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Post by waybig1010101 on May 30, 2015 5:06:18 GMT
Looks great so far =D Can't wait to see the background Thank you very much. As for his background, don't hold your breath. XD Alright lol xD Fair enough
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Post by Kazenokami on May 30, 2015 5:08:13 GMT
lol
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Post by Kazenokami on May 30, 2015 21:40:26 GMT
Added Face Claim and "Spoilers". 
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Post by HungryHunter on May 30, 2015 22:10:08 GMT
I don't think anybody's done anything like that line of pictures along the bottom, and it's a nice touch. I am worried about the use of terms straight from Bleach like Hollow, and you have to be careful with extra forms when there are many.
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Post by Kazenokami on May 31, 2015 1:47:31 GMT
Use of terms? What do you mean by this?
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Post by Kuma on May 31, 2015 2:29:47 GMT
I think that Hunter thought that your Face Claim is also taking the names of said forms, but I think is not the case, right?
You're only telling others that you're reserving those looks for future improvements on your character, not that you will use those names for those forms
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Post by HungryHunter on May 31, 2015 2:30:08 GMT
I think I misinterpreted something. I thought those pictures were names of his forms, not the names of the looks as they actually are. You're good.
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Post by Kazenokami on May 31, 2015 3:43:34 GMT
I think that Hunter thought that your Face Claim is also taking the names of said forms, but I think is not the case, right? You're only telling others that you're reserving those looks for future improvements on your character, not that you will use those names for those forms This is exactly what I meant and I also fixed it so no one else misinterprets again. lol
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Post by HungryHunter on May 31, 2015 13:52:30 GMT
Sorry bout that. As a non Bleach fan, I didn't recognize the names and thought you were using them for the forms.
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Post by Kazenokami on May 31, 2015 19:52:08 GMT
That's perfectly alright.
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