Sakura
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Post by Sakura on Feb 20, 2017 8:40:55 GMT
W.I.P
Ariana Lane
:Name:
Ariana Lane
:Age:
27
:Gender:
Female
:Personality:
W.i.P
:History:
Growing up in a broken family in Nevada, her parents were divorced, her mother was a drug junkie and a slut, her father was a drunk and regularly abused her, when she was 16 she ran away and hitch hiked to Seattle and barley made it by on the streets, she hardly made it by on donations and felt horrible every day and even contemplated suicide for awhile, she woke up one day and slapped herself and chose to get a job at a nearby Starbucks, lying about her age she got a small crappy apartment and (this is where I leave off because I still need to work on everything else ＿|￣|○)
:Appearance:
Light brown, THICC, hair going down to the base of her back and light orange eyes with a black rim around the boundary of the iris, she has pale skin with dark red nail polish, she wears a cat eye design for eye liner and nude lipstick and long lashes and ok "Assets"
:Powers:
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:Magic Items:
A glove of Darkness that leaves dark purple tendrils that allows her to control things
(Weaknesses will be marked in red) |
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Post by HungryHunter on Feb 20, 2017 16:23:32 GMT
Hi Icicle, good to see you again. I'd just like to recommend finishing your first bio before making another unless you're dropping Anna entirely.
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Sakura
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Post by Sakura on Feb 21, 2017 17:15:29 GMT
I honestly don't even... really remember. Why I made Anna... GOD I FEEL SO BAD
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Post by HungryHunter on Feb 22, 2017 0:03:16 GMT
No need. We just tend to encourage newbies to finish one bio before making more. We can just count this as the first.
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Post by Kuma on Feb 22, 2017 3:16:35 GMT
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Sakura
Newbie
Let us move forward, Don't look behind
Posts: 29
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Post by Sakura on Feb 22, 2017 3:46:52 GMT
Hold up, hold up, HOLD UP, what if I want a char that's a godly alien that flies around the cosmos on a flying unicorn that farts rainbows? |
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Post by RedLenai on Feb 22, 2017 4:14:53 GMT
Hello Sakura, remember to read all of the rules of Viceverse RPG. Remember that this forum is created and focused into roleplaying. I guess I've already told you with your other (deleted) bio as well but a little reminder doesn't hurt anybody! Everything you need to know about VV, Character creation, how this site works and everything, here --->> viceverserpg.freeforums.net/board/7/startedIt's easy, even for me that I'm spanish. I understand most of the rules by the moment, so if English is your first lenguage is going to be easy! Pay attention to the rules! So! Let me help you with your little question here! What if I want a char that's a godly alien that flies around the cosmos on a flying unicorn that farts rainbows?
- In order to keep a balance between characters, powers, and abilities. We CAN'T create "God-Like" ( Gary Stu/Maru Sue) Characters, not matter if they are aliens, supernatural beings, or my mom. ( Even if mom is scary and I can't win against her!). Because... it'll be like cheating, I mean. You don't get angry when someone uses cheats to win in a game or just win 'cause they said " My game, my rules"? Well, same happens with characters here. He can fart rainbows, there's no rule against it but that wouldn't mean some other people characters would make "comments" about it. Like " Hey dude, that weaboo is farting rainbows. Probably they ate an unicorn" (Still, remember that what happens between characters is not related to writers or users. If characters fight, that doesn't mean we are fighting). Feel free to ask me too, It's not like I'm a moderator or an admin, but from a newbie to another I can help you making things easier... a little. |
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Sakura
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Post by Sakura on Feb 22, 2017 4:19:49 GMT
"Hey dude, that weaboo is farting rainbows. Probably they ate an unicorn"
Do I srly come off as a weeb? I mean, yes I have Sakura out of all the names but that's just cuz I think their pretty...
Anyways, thanks
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Post by RedLenai on Feb 22, 2017 4:22:43 GMT
Man, that IF the alien-godly character that farts rainbows were in front of one of my characters, pretty nasty one. So imagine it coming, remember, don't take things as personal issue. Remember: Characters are not ourselves in "game" mode, characters are creations, not if WE were in some random story.
And your welcome, despite probably my english is not good at all, so probably small "mistakes" like this tend to happen.
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Sakura
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Post by Sakura on Feb 22, 2017 4:24:43 GMT
Oh, sorry, I just get slightly confused every now and then, sorry!
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Post by HungryHunter on Feb 23, 2017 14:52:21 GMT
<abbr> SakuraThe powers are interesting but you're going to have to get a lot more specific. As it it sounds like it could easily be used to godmode. </abbr> |
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Post by Kuma on Feb 23, 2017 18:55:07 GMT
Like Hungryhunter said, you should expand more on the powers, how much strength those tendrils have? How much can they lift? How much can they move? How precise?
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